1st Attempt for Both Vignettes. Help needed

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1st Attempt for Both Vignettes. Help needed

Postby archidan » Mon Apr 16, 2018 8:22 pm

All. If anyone can please review my first attempt at both vignettes I'd gladly appreciate it. Thank you for your time in advanced
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Re: 1st Attempt for Both Vignettes. Help needed

Postby Sparky83 » Tue Apr 17, 2018 4:39 am

SG-
Display does not sit on level ground. Major error.
Runoff is directed toward the display instead of away from it. There is no swale to intercept runoff. Fatal.
Display is not 6" above the surrounding grade. The uphill side is below grade. Fatal.

SD-
There is a gap in the winter wind protection for the PP.
New coniferous trees partially block the view of the pond from the restaurant.
Coniferous trees should not overlap paving. You cannot walk or drive under them. See the tree diagrams.
Main drive overlaps the easement. Major error at the least.
Building separation is suspect. Slide your sketch circle south and it may not fit between the buildings without overlapping them.
A walk running along the edge of the PP (like at the HCP parking) is redundant.
New coniferous trees downwind of the restaurant serve no purpose.
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Re: 1st Attempt for Both Vignettes. Help needed

Postby archidan » Thu Apr 19, 2018 6:27 am

Sparky83 wrote:SG-
Display does not sit on level ground. Major error.
Runoff is directed toward the display instead of away from it. There is no swale to intercept runoff. Fatal.
Display is not 6" above the surrounding grade. The uphill side is below grade. Fatal.

SD-
There is a gap in the winter wind protection for the PP.
New coniferous trees partially block the view of the pond from the restaurant.
Coniferous trees should not overlap paving. You cannot walk or drive under them. See the tree diagrams.
Main drive overlaps the easement. Major error at the least.
Building separation is suspect. Slide your sketch circle south and it may not fit between the buildings without overlapping them.
A walk running along the edge of the PP (like at the HCP parking) is redundant.
New coniferous trees downwind of the restaurant serve no purpose.


Thanks for your feedback and input. I will review and try again
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