Please review - sajjad alt

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Thank you for any comments regarding the below alts. Is a beam required above a window wall? Or only a clerestory? I know some suggest it is better to draw individual (simply supported beams). Is there any chance this may as too many beams? Clearly, I'm concerned about everything.

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Thanks