BL try

[SStephens]

Hello all,
Try at BL. Also attaching enlarged area of L and R . Does it achieve visual control requirement with interior windows at corner? Any comments would be great! Thank you!
Also, just to clarify, 2nd floor doesn't have to align with the exterior permit er of the 1st floor, it just cannot extend beyond it?
-SS

[kaiser zoso]

Seems the the window at R achieves the program requirement. Which makes me realize I left this requirement out of my first attempt entirely! curses!

Maybe the corridor to LM is approaching being a dead end?

[Coach]

Does it achieve visual control requirement with interior windows at corner?

Barely. I would allow for 4' min windows.

Also, just to clarify, 2nd floor doesn't have to align with the exterior permit er of the 1st floor, it just cannot extend beyond it?

Correct.

MP/CR distance poor.
TS proportions weak.
Align LR doors.
Corridor exit is redundant.
LM shape very weak.
LM/SO distance weak.
Limit exterior recess depth to 2 x width.

[SStephens]

Great! Thanks for review and comments!
-SS