Comments please.

For the locker rooms, do they need access to MP and corridor or how I have it is ok?

Why do you have 2 elevators on the lower level?
Double doors are a waste of time. Egress capacity is not in the scope of this vignette.
LR's have no access to circulation as required.
Cannot see any windows.
Avoid L-shaped rooms.
Elevator does not reach the upper level.
SW proportions are poor. 2:1 is the max recommended.
TR's do not have to stack.

@Sparky83, thank you so much! I really shouldn't attempt the vignettes so late at night. BIG DUH on the elevator, I wondered why it didn't go through to second floor and I totally read the program wrong on that. I will try again, maybe I will try a different type of system to write down the program! Onward I go.....