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[seflo]

I'm a little confused about the visual control of the lobby, game room, and child room from the receptionist room. By putting a window in the wall that is shared between the child room and the receptionist satisfy this? From what point in the receptionist room do the entry doors of the other room need to be visible?

[Coach]

I'm a little confused about the visual control of the lobby, game room, and child room from the receptionist room. By putting a window in the wall that is shared between the child room and the receptionist satisfy this?

Yes.

From what point in the receptionist room do the entry doors of the other room need to be visible?

Provide a reasonable line of sight from within the controlling room.

MP doors to circulation must swing out.
Corridor exit is redundant.
LM shape is poor.