BL - Alt 1

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BL - Alt 1

Postby zordon » Sat Oct 12, 2013 3:00 pm

Using alternate file C1TUT2W1.31.dwg. Feedback appreciated!

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Re: BL - Alt 1

Postby Coach » Sat Oct 12, 2013 4:54 pm

Lobby shape poor. Do extend lobby to make corridor.
MP and GR shapes weak.
EE access from R illogical.
Corridor exit is redundant.
LR/MP door conflict.
LM shape poor.
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Re: BL - Alt 1

Postby zordon » Sun Oct 13, 2013 10:22 am

Coach - revised per your comments. Does this attempt work better?

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Re: BL - Alt 1

Postby Coach » Mon Oct 14, 2013 3:43 pm

zordon wrote:Coach - revised per your comments. Does this attempt work better?

L proportions poor.
Main entry control poor at best.
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