Any thoughts greatly appreciated.

Realized I didn't have the clear width for the 60" turning @ 180 for the ramp vignette.

As for the the upper roof I assume as long as the heights meet at the same ridge height the eave heights can be different as shown because they are not symmetrical. I know that symmetry is probably safer now that I am looking at it, so I should have kept the ridge at the center for the upper roof. As for the lower roof keeping roof pitch perpendicular at the clerestory is safer to me than having the slope run along that face. Also I missed the skylight in Sajjad's bathroom.